First day (10 min figure drawing)

Hi, Pilot. It seems like you have to improve the fluency of your quick sketches. I also had that mistake. I highly recommend you just try to drawn faster and set a general lines to contextualize the picture. I think that you are trying to drawn perflecty but that is impossible at the beginning.

I recommend this vídeos to learn how to drawn imperfectly but faster. That's a huge difference.

7 Ls of gesture drawing from Alphonse Dunn

How to sketch & draw people

How to Draw Gesture

Best,

Victor.

Welcome aboard, Pilot, this is Polyvios Animations, and how are you this morning?

So, like Scampobianco put it, nice work on your proportions, but your edges, gestures, and silhouettes all seem too rigidest to my sensibilities yet. How would you like to please go ahead with our interactive drawing tutorial here on our site?

The reason is, as a result, your quickest sketch fluency will become the least stilted, and therefore the most dynamic, vital, energetic, but fluidest and flowing.

For most influences and inspiration, please look into the old free PDF of the Shamus Culhane Animation book here, for the primary quick sketch exercise.

Take these things with the smallest and littlest grain of salt, but our hats off to you.