30 second sketches June 14th 2020

Hello Fadee7, it's good to set a goal of improvement for yourself, because in order to become a great artist you must improve! (Duh) Now to get all of the basic sayings out of the way, I think that an issue here is the stiffness within your poses. Looking at your linework, it looks as though you were sketching these figures out, when in actuality, you should always work on capturing the eseential lines and curves to a pose that makes it dynamic. I'm not able to tell if all of these figures are females, but I assume that there was a mix between male and female, and in that case some of the figures are a little unrecognizable. In your female poses for example, there should be more curvature within her proportions, because naturallly, females are much curvier than males! Also, though faces are not very important when capturing a figure, try to at least outline the basic shape of the figures head, for example in all of your drawings your figures seem to have rectangular/ trapezoidal head shapes, but from different angles, no matter if you are drawing the same figure, the head shape should vary. Overall keep working hard and I know you will improve! I promise that this critique was in no way meant to bash or demean you, and I was pointing out the things that you could fix that will definitely lead to imporvement! Good luck :)

Love the feeling and vitality in your quick pose scribbles, Fadee7, nevertheless, I've got one more smallest request: Why don't you do yet another 30 minutes of 1 minute sketches of figure sketches, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty please, please, please, please, please, please?????? The reason why is because, you'll get better at your recent goal of loosening up your bodily attitudes in motion. Hope, pray and expect that it'll work out for you and your portfolio.



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P.S. Instead of just your wrist, but your elbow and shoulder. Take care!

The arms in the sketches aren't really there, only in some of them, and it's very messy which can make it harder to pick everything out, other than all of this I like the poses, and how you drew them out. I would keep on trying the same poses over and over again to get better at it.

proportion are right, energy is right and i even notice a uique style. So practice until you feal sadisfied.