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Really clean. Very efficient. Overall very successful. For me the contrast of the dark gray background makes the overall image harder to read.

Nicest job on your face, JeLiWa, still, I've made one tiniest, littlest idea: I like the feeling and vitality being put across, so why don't you kindly do 2 30-second and 29-1 second faces, please?

The reason why you could, would and should do this idea is because, you'll be able to capture the movement of the expressions in, quite literally, one stroke.

Hope you've found this completely and totally useful and productive.

wow it's good

Wow. You've captured angles in simple strokes with a clean and efficient style. Your proportions are great. From my own skill level, I can assume you're considering every plane of the face. This is so pleasing to look at. I simply can't offer any useful advice.

It really looks nice.