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© 2022 Cartoonistahn
Done as part of a practice session with poses of 5 minutes in length.
My current goal is: Better understand human anatomy, so I can render imagined poses
NHWilliam
I'm really enjoying the freedom in your style! Nice work.
Polyvios Animations
Good morning, Cartoonistahn, I'm Polyvios Animations, how are you doing this morning? Greatest job on your signature style of drawing figures, and their inherent strength behind them. Great work, and keep up the great jobs.
I've got one small suggestion. My faces don't look or seem warmed up yet. Would you please loosen up your arms with 6 minutes of 29 second faces and expressions drawings? Because, your face and expressions caricatures will become less stiff and more spontaneous, lively, and alive. For more details, look into Nancy Beiman's book. Good luck on you and your journey.
I've got one small suggestion. My faces don't look or seem warmed up yet. Would you please loosen up your arms with 6 minutes of 29 second faces and expressions drawings? Because, your face and expressions caricatures will become less stiff and more spontaneous, lively, and alive. For more details, look into Nancy Beiman's book. Good luck on you and your journey.
I myself am still learning, so take my critiques with a grain of salt, BUT I think this looks great! The proportions seem to be very spot on! To me, there honestly isn't that much that blatantly stands out to me as wrong, so great job!
The one thing I would say is to maybe focus on not making the joins so thin, especially with the male models. But honestly, that is such a small detail for these quick studies, so I think you did a great job!