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Say, Elijah, greater work on your range of spaces, edges, relationships, and tones of your nuder figure drawing in charcoal form. Please keep up the greater work, but I don't think or feel that I'm getting enough of those forceful shapes and spaces? Would you like to please try out 30 minutes of 2 minute nude and non-nude poses in 360-degree turnarounds(rotations)?(15 doodles)

The reason why you could and should try this feedback is because you can and will make your balance of positive and negative spaces lesser than stiff, but more than dynamic, vital, therefore more energetic. For more practice of your learning curve, please look into signing up for a free drawing practice with Love Life Drawing here.

So, my hat's off to you, so let's all hope they've helped but supported you much more better.

In terms of the shading and values, it seems fine for the piece.The line of action is clearly visible and the perspective on the arm holding the small stick is very nice.The porportions of the body seem strange(the torso seems quite long in context of the legs and ribs), so if you are not already doing this, I would recomend focusing on proportion for your next practice.