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Hey there,

the poses seems ok, the proportions are a bit off, so make sure you're constantly checking it by comparision with the other parts of the drawing. The head is too small, if you begin with it, then you have to keep an eye out for that not to become a habit, by that is meant, the head is the first measuarement item on the page, if it is the base, then everything else was made too big for that. For that you can use a simple measurement that is :
top of the head → pit of the neck = = pit of the neck → end of the rib cage (12 rib) = = 12 rib → end of the glutes.

Remenbering that the end of the glutes is a tight lower than the end of the pelvis.

Another thing, check out Steve Hustan on youtube for the simples shading techinique, you might improve alot from it. It is the 2 values + core shadow, a simple but strong method for simplefied rendering.

Nice drawing!
Great journey, cheers!

Amazing job on your forces, spaces, and relationships, Djdxyz, but these forces all seem too rigid to me yet. So this morning, how would you like to loosen up your range of pose gestures of 12 2-minute drawings? As a result, your range of lines of action and rhythm will become less stilted but even more dynamic, energetic, and fluid.

For more tips and tricks on gesture drawing, please look at this video from YouTube.

My hat's off to you from all of us.