Hello, Learning Artist, and welcome to Line of Action, I'm Polyvios Animations, and how are you?
Say, Learning, you must be definitely on the right track on understanding the basic head construction of your head portraits. Great job, I say, so please keep up, but the head forces all look and seem a bit too somewhat rigid to me. How would you like to lighten up your lines therefore be even far more decisive in your graphic lines with 28 minutes of 2 minute head warmups?
Because, if you warm up your lighter lines and lightest shapes, then your understanding and control will be developed into being the least stiffest and the most dynamic, energetic, and furthermore, liveliest in communicating your expressiveness. For most info, look into a copy of Andrew Loomis' Drawing The Head and Hands. Good luck, and may you find these encouraging and helpful and informational.
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