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Hi everyone,

its been a while since my last post so I thougt it would be a good idea to ask for more critique that could ponit out my mistakes.
Since the last critique I tried to focus on the anatomical strucutre in the longer drawings and on the volumes and overall gesture in the shorter ones. I am especially interested in opinions on the volume drawings because I never tried these before. I usually start with a black shape and put lighter values later.
I am looking forward for your opinions. :)

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Hi,

Thanks for your great critique! I could imidiately spot the problems you mentioned and I will definetely work on them. I created some scematic drawings of mussels and made cards out of it to learn their names and places.

Hi,

I've been lurking on this site for about a year now and since I dont have any real live art instructors around at the moment I wanted to ask you guys for general critique on my drawings.

Thank you for your time and your knollege