20210116practise
© 2021 Irrelevant
Done as part of a 1 hour class.
My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering
dilandoubishop
Very nice, keen eye for overall shapes of the head. Good proportions, good strokes. Looks like you work loose. I wish I have something more substantive to say to give you something work on. You say you are a beginner but this is solid studies so far.
Polyvios Animations
Wow, irrelevant!
That's a nicer job on your lighter touch on those faces here. I really love how loose and light your lines are.
So, if I was to give you an idea for a critique, it would be that your faces are on the stiff side. Why don't you do 3 minutes of 30 second expressions, please?
The reason why you would do those practice expressions and faces is because, it can and will help out on your lightest lines in your study of your basics of rendering.
Cheers for you, and I hope you've found this admirable, supportive, and encouraging.
That's a nicer job on your lighter touch on those faces here. I really love how loose and light your lines are.
So, if I was to give you an idea for a critique, it would be that your faces are on the stiff side. Why don't you do 3 minutes of 30 second expressions, please?
The reason why you would do those practice expressions and faces is because, it can and will help out on your lightest lines in your study of your basics of rendering.
Cheers for you, and I hope you've found this admirable, supportive, and encouraging.
Egeltje
Proportions are good. Carry on! 😊
Harmonynixon
I really love how your quick sketches start out pretty rough and throughout the page you can see the flow come in as you get warmed up, by the end of the class you can see some really great drawings. I love the expression you gave in the bigger portrait sketches.
Ann Louy
I like how even with simple strokes i can recognize the expression~Good work
