Jan 31 Sketches
© 2024 MaddieWhew, drawing non-stylized people is tough 😞 Though, I am proud of how these came out! Critiques welcome as always.
(I'm shy to respond most of the time but know I do read all critiques written for me! Much love <3)
Polyvios Animations
Hello once again, Maddie. Mostly spectacular job on your extremely prominent display of forceful figures of females and males and whatever figures. I totally think your gestures are on the strongest and most ambitious track, and I feel that these attitudes aren't too fluidest and flowing enough yet. May I recommend drawing from your shoulders with 46 minutes of 2 minute attitude sketches?
The logical explanation is as a result, your lines of action and flow will become the most strongest and self assured in their delineations. For most details, would you care to look into Shamus Culhane’s Animation From Script To Screen. for the quick sketch exercise.
Good luck from me.
Tmxg
Hi Lanez, you can put good dynamism in your work and you seem to master the general anatomy just fine. Hairs are good, boobs, torso, shadows are great.
If I could give an advice on how you can get even better, maybe practice a bit more the anatomy:
- on the hands (thumb)
- feets (ankles seem off, no toes)
- legs (maybe it is perspective but it seems like calf is bigger and longer than the thigh)
- shoulders (the neck part seems a bit off I feel like something is a bit off there but I can't pin point what)
I can't wait to get to your level of drawing , thank you for sharing !