Ginger Snappish的論壇貼

I really like your stylization of proportion and your simplicity of line! You seem to be getting contraposto as well (when the shoulders tilt one way, the hips will tilt the other, in order to keep the balance). I think perhaps you could try some slightly longer poses in addition to your quick gestures, to help yourself notice the bony landmarks of the body. I attached an example file, I hope it helps a little! Keep up the good work!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/6tbamjpwkvzcarp/Bonylandmarks.jpg?dl=0

I think you are doing better than you think! These look good! I admire the volume of your drawings-more makes better! Sometimes your fingertips seem to go in a few directions in some of the drawings and it can make things look a little stiff or off....maybe try drawing tripartite sections when working on hands to help group the fingers and sometimes drawing the palm and then fingertip ellipses first can help 'direct' the fingers and the flow of the hand.

I made a quick sketch to show what I mean