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Thank you so much for the critique. I see what you mean about the neck. At this point, I don't know if it is possible to erase all of that and redraw it without messing up the picture because I no longer have access to the model. I just wanted to know what it needed so that I can learn for my next drawing.

Something is wrong with the neck. This was a life drawing from my figure class at school. My professor only gave me this vague "it needs more development in the neck" comment. I can see that the neck has issues, but I am not sure what I can do to help them.
http://figure-of-speech.deviantart.com/art/richard-476917058