Ms Impossibility的論壇貼

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Order is top to bottom, left to right. Any critique is appreciated - I'm still new with animal sessions.

Thanks for the input! I'm still very clunky when it comes to animals (hence all the practice), so I follow a slightly different workflow than when I do humans. For humans it's stick figure -> flesh out forms -> adjust proportions -> details, while for animals my approach is block out shapes -> adjust proportions -> details.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1IJzB-89SMqnwbYriQFdQB16DvJKaC9zP/view?usp=sharing

It goes top-bottom left-right, though the change in quality probably reflects that.

It's my first time doing animals, too, so any feedback is appreciated!

Looking through the gestures as a whole, I can tell you focus a lot on details and shaping of the forms. Maybe that's what's holding you back in the 30-seconds. Try and shorten those stick figures to 10 seconds and see if you can't get more in from there.