Thank you so much for your critique! I will do my best to improve my weak points, because I am considering taking art professionally, and I know I have to work a lot and work hard for that level. Thank you again for your help!
Hi,
First, of all this is a pretty good drawing! If you are looking to improve, I would make the shading more detailed- add more darkness. Also, add more texture to the hair and maybe you can try adding little hairs to the eyebrows, especially in the front to make it look more natural. You were concerned about the eyes: try making the pupil blacker, and add some shading inside the iris, like little lines. The proportions are correct, and as I said before overall is a good portrait :).