AliceAnimation的論壇貼

Hello once again I am back, and hopefully improved. On my last post (https://line-of-action.com/forums/topic/hour-gesture-session/)

I was graciously given a very in depth critique that I really tried to take to heart. Tldr: get better at line confidence, so hopefully one can see if i've improved or not. I look forward to your feedback.

30 seconds: http://imgur.com/a/wmtom

2 min: http://imgur.com/a/HUDT8

Thank you, I think that is good advice. I try and capture forms and stuff too early, and I lack line confidence when under the stress of a time limit. Is there anything i'm doing right?

I'm an 18 year old artist who aspires to be a character designer. I really lack ideas how to improve on it other than the few informational bits I get from Aaron Blaise, character design forge etc. Anyways, any feedback on that or gesture would be great.

Humans: http://imgur.com/a/rwC1P 5min -> 2 min drawings

Animals: http://imgur.com/a/qShwL all 2 min