I can see how your focus on line weight has helped. You convey a lot more with fewer lines now. As far as where to improve. I can see potential in continuiong your journey into line weight, going even thicker with what you have. The one thing I would say detracts from your work is how some lines are so light they feel that they fade away or just exist out in space. I see this specifically in the top row left and right sketches. It took me a while to figure out that there was a cloth there, and a couple of lines in the other show the form as much rounder that it seems it actually is.
Great work! I hope to see you on the critique runs again!
Okay, that makes sense. I'll try to scale it down. Thanks for the help
I've been trying to uppload a photo of a drawing I did for critique, and it keeps saying the picture didn't upload properly. It's in JPG format. Is there a solution to this issue?
Thanks for any help. :)
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Kim
edited this post on September 21, 2018 5:23pm.
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Kim
edited this post on September 23, 2018 6:20pm.
Reason: Closing support request since OP accepted answer
Just noticed this and I really appreciate your, mention of that past project (and the possibility of something in the future)
