Keizia的論壇貼

Hi, it's been two weeks since my last post, so here is what I've been doin'.

I tried to take into consideration all the critiscims and advices I received so... here's the result.

What do you think ? Where should I (still) improve ? Should I try myself on different subject ?

Link to the album : https://ibb.co/album/NT4Pk8

Hi, Here is my advice :

Try to draw bigger for your 5-10 minutes drawings.

Instead of one little corner, take the whole page if you don't mind using too much paper.

Right now you are drowning your sketches with unnecessary drawing lines. I can see that you are trying to highlight the shadows by doing so, but because the drawings are so small, we quickly lose the shapes and details of your sketches.

Drawing bigger will force you - even unconsciously - to consider where you need to invest your time and energy with the time you have (and also give your pencil a bit of a break)

I think your last 15 min study shows that this might be right path for you : can you see how better you are doing when you allow yourself more space ?

Hope that helped. Good luck !

• Keizia edited this post on August 18, 2023 1:33pm.
• Keizia edited this post on August 18, 2023 1:39pm.
• Keizia edited this post on August 18, 2023 1:40pm.

Hello, everyone. (non-english speaker so please forgive any grammatical mistakes)

It's been awhile since I've been on this website, but I'm glad I kept it in my Favourite.

I love drawing, but it's been quite some time since I practice Figure Study due to work, and I realize how much I missed it.

However I also realized I'm a bit rusty now. It's still look... decent (?) but I KNOW I can improve.

I also know I struggle to see and draw the "shapes" inside the body correctly.

Waiting for your feedbacks and any advices/excercices I should try on my next practice study.

Thanks a lot.

Link to the Album : https://ibb.co/album/hxnWr9

• Keizia edited this post on August 15, 2023 12:34pm.