woman on box
© 2023 Thebighoss117
Done as part of a 1 hour and 30 minute class.
My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form. I've been using pen lately, that way i can't hide my mistakes.
Galiciabaleria
The form and position is good, although your hairy lines make it seem not clean and unsure of the your outlines. I would recommend some exercises of perspective for the feets and exercises to make your lines more straight and curved so you dont have to do so many to correct them through your drawing, it happens to everyone, is a very common thing to do until you get the skill, even i still working on it with pen. Lose your fear! Congrats
Polyvios Animations
Good afternoon, Thebighoss117, and welcome aboard once again. Say, nicer job on your range of boldness and confidence on your face, figure, hands, and feet, however, the feet and hands all look or seem too hairier and itchier to me. How would you care to loosen up your cleaner lines with 5 minutes of 30 second gesture drawings of those aforementioned appendages?
The logical premise behind this constructive critique is so that your confident lines will become more cleaner and clearer like you never sketched before, because the more your speed up your line economies, the more they will all look or appear to have been delineated in a single stroke.
Final Postscript:
The reason why you could and should do this sketching exercise is because in order to believably render the forces and perspectives of hands and feet, you could and would find some finest info on how to simplify complicated forces and forms like hands and feet right there on places like Pinterest or Youtube.
Here is the link: Pinterest
And this YouTube video right down there.
https://youtu.be/wSMhDiWmjy8
And so, congrats.
The logical premise behind this constructive critique is so that your confident lines will become more cleaner and clearer like you never sketched before, because the more your speed up your line economies, the more they will all look or appear to have been delineated in a single stroke.
Final Postscript:
The reason why you could and should do this sketching exercise is because in order to believably render the forces and perspectives of hands and feet, you could and would find some finest info on how to simplify complicated forces and forms like hands and feet right there on places like Pinterest or Youtube.
Here is the link: Pinterest
And this YouTube video right down there.
https://youtu.be/wSMhDiWmjy8
And so, congrats.
